Last Updated: 09/18/2026

As usual, and my frustration and anxiety I get with my College and its professors.

I can no longer use this for my class.

It's not like I did much. We should be on Module 4, and she is keeping me behind on Module 1. And always waits till I just to the assigemnts cause I have to do some sort of school work each week knowing I have to crash do it all again. Maybe I wouldn't be so good at doing the beats, outlines, and writing if they kept me right as I should each week instead of 5 weeeks go by and I crash re do everything in a couple hours. 

Beats

ACT 1

Stout, CO

·   WHB

1868

W. H. B. Stout rides a train from Washington to Nebraska.

Two young boys are about to be tossed off the train.

WHB helps them.

Offers them jobs in a few years when they are old enough.

·   Best Friends

Franky B and Henry Jabez are 7 and 5, taking care of themselves.

Separated from their parents during a bandit raid they are alone.

·   Helping Hands

1870

Franky and Henry are pre-teens.

They some Cheyenne Native Americans who are attacked by White man.

·   The Land

1872

The boys pass the native rituals to become men.

·   Last Words

1874

Their adoptive father becomes ill.

He wants the boys to go out and live the life they were born into.

Their mother wants them to marry like their stepbrother.

·   Medicine

The boys find medicine that can heal their father.

They have no money.

They hear of mining work nearby.

·   Eavesdropping

The boys listen outside a bar hearing a meeting with WHB, his son Richard are arranging a marriage for their boy Herbert to The Bardwell's daughter, Louise in a few years.

·   F-Head

The boys are caught outside the bar, and a Mine Boss named Hans Gorshien starts to beat Henry

The Sherriff arrives with WHB just as Franky was choaking him with a rope.

They are let go, and ask WHB for jobs, like he promised.

·   Workin’ Boys

1881

The boys have been working hard and are transferring to a new location. Stout, CO. They say goodbye to their adoptive family.

·   Love at first sight

The boys are building a home in Stout, CO.

Henry's dog gets loose to meet another dog owned by Louise.

They can't take their eyes off one another.

·   Sturdy

Frankie speaks with the shop keep.

He learns some of the land was stolen from the Natives. Told to keep hush, and just do his job.

·   Warning

1883

Henry is caught with Louise.

He is beaten and given a warning to stay away from her.

·   Marriage

Louise defends Henry.

Her parents forbid it and she is to meet her soon to be husband soon.

·   Grown up

Franky and Henry have a fight.

They refuse to help each other and tell one another to stop what they are planning.

Henry wants to run away with Louise.

Franky wants to help the Natives.

All done for nothing. As it took 3 weeks to be told, nope something else after beign asked for it. I won't screenshot her saying to research and crap. 

ESSAY

Outline

Stout, CO

ACT 1

1868

SCENE 1

INT. TRAIN – AFTERNOON – WHB STOUT

We see William H.B. Stout on the train.

He talks of his own accomplishments and status.

WHB sits on a train from Washington back to Nebraska

SCENE 2

INT. TRAIN – AFTERNOON – RUGRATS

Franky and Henry are caught on the train with no tickets.

Clever, they delay and are saved by WHB.

SCENE 3

INT. TRAIN – AFTERNOON – POLITICAINS

WHB stops the boys tossed of the train.

Promotes his good deeds.

Tells the boys they have a job in the future with him.

SCENE 4

EXT. MIDDLE AMERICA – MORNING – FRIENDS IN HIGH PLACES

We see Franky and Henry parts ways from WHB; who helped them.

SCENE 5

CONTINUOUS

Franky and Henry help one another to survive as young boys.

SCENE 6

EXT. CONTINUOUS – EACH OTHER

1870

Franky and Henry are barley getting by as pre-teens

SCENE 7

EXT. NEBRASKA PLAINS – MID-DAY- SURVIVAL

Franky and Henry wonder Mid-America.

They save a native American attacked by the white man.

The Natives take them in as their own.

SCENE 8

EXT. THE LAND – CONTINUOUS – AGING

Franky and Henry are raised by the Cheyenne Indians, into men.

SCENE 9

EXT. RITUAL – DAWN – MEN

1872

Franky and Henry take their rite of passage to become men amongst the Cheyenne Indians

SCENE 10

1874

INT. TEEPEE – DAYTIME – FATHER AND SONS

Franky and Henry's adoptive father becomes ill.

He wants them to go and live the life they were born able to live.

SCENE 11

EXT. MIDDLE AMERICAN TOWN – MIDDAY – BOYS

Franky and Henry arrive in a town. They find medicine to help their adoptive father. No money.

SCENE 12

EXT. MIDDLE AMERICAN TOWN – AFTERNOON – MEDICINE

The boys learn fo work in the town.

They learn of good and bad working

They obtain jobs in the mines nearby.

SCENE 13

CONTINUOUS

The boys try to earn money and obtain jobs.

SCENE 14

INT/EXT. ROCKY MOUNTAIN TOWN SALOON – EVENING – EAVESDROPPING

Franky and Henry hear of WHB in town.

They Eavesdrop outside a private secret meeting.

WHB is paying money for his son to marry one of the Bardwell's daughters when she is of age of 18 in a couple years.

The boys are young to understand, but not understand.

SCENE15

EXT. SALOON ALLEY – NIGHT – F HEAD

The mine boss, Hans Gorshien, is drunk to suspect Franky and Henry are up to no good.

He grabs Henry and starts to whoop he ass!

Franky defends to save Henry and use a rope to choke Hans.

The commotion draws everyone to the alley.

Hans is stopped.

The boys let free.

WHB gives the boys jobs in the mine!

SCENE 16

CONTINUOUS

The boys earn money to help their father.

They continue to work hard.

WHB helps them look good and be promoted.

SCENE 17

1879

CONTINUOUS

Franky is promoted

Franky and Henry leave the Cheyenne Indians with honor.

Franky and Henry move to Stout, CO by WHB referral

SCENE 18

1881

EXT. STOUT, CO – DAY – DOING WELL

Franky and Henry build a home in Stout, CO

SCENE 19

EXT. STOUT, CO – MORNING – LOVE

Franky and Henry are on their way to work at the quarry.

Henry and Louise meet for the first time.

Franky pulls Henry away to go to work.

SCENE 20

EXT. THE BOY'S PLACE – EVENING – FIRST SIGHT

Franky and Henry are having a cook out.

Henry's dog runs off.

SCENE 21

EXT. PLAINS – NIGHT – EYES

Henry’s dog finds Louise's dog.

Henry and Louise fall in love at first sight.

SCENE 22

CONTINUOUS

Henry and Louise keep meeting up.

They are in love.

They are intimate.

SCENE 23

EXT. QUARRY – AFTERNOON - FRIENDSHIP

1882

Henry asks Franky to cover for him and leave early to meet up with Louise.

Franky works hard.

The Quarry bosses see Franky's hard work.

SCENE 24

EXT. CAMPSITE – NIGHT – AFTER HOURS

Franky is friends with all the workers.

The bosses watch him.

SCENE 25

INT. SHOP – MORNING – SUPLIES

1883

Franky buys supplies.

He is told of Louise’s arranged marriage

Franky is told the ritzy of the town want him to move up and be with them

SCENE 26

INT. BARDWELL’S BARN – MORNING – LOVEBIRDS

Henry and Louise are cuddling in the barn listening to the bird chirp and confessing their love.

Mr. Bardwell catches them.

SCENE 27

EXT. SHOP – MORNING – THEIVES

Franky learns some of the Quarry was stolen from the local natives.

Franky starts to fight a mine boss calling the natives Savages.

He is tossed into the jail to calm down.

SCENE 28

EXT. PRARIE – MORNING – WARNING

Mr. Bardwell and the farm hands beat Henry up.

They threaten to cut off his balls.

SCENE 29

INT. BARDWELL'S HOUSE – MORNING

Mrs. Bardwell tells Louise her future and how it will be.

We learn the Stout family and Barwell’s have a long history and to have the honor of marrying into is for the good of the family.

She brands Louise’s arm with a hot fork to teach her, her place.

SCENE 30

INT. JAIL – NOON – PICK YOUR SIDE

Franky pleas to get out.

Henry is tossed into jail with Franky.

The Mayor gives them both a talk about where their place is and where it can be in the future.

SCENE 31

EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT – SCOTT FREE

Franky yells at Henry.

Franky wants Henry to leave Louise.

Franky says he has to help the natives for their lost land.

Franky brings up their raising.

Henry argues about being told to go out and start a family and live a life not of the natives.

Henry doesn’t like how the town is trying to make them into their puppets.

SCENE 32

INT. THE BOY'S HOUSE – DAWN – ON YOUR OWN

Franky and Henry were up all night drinking.

They both woke up ready to ask for each other's help

Henry is going to ask Louise to marry her and leave Stout.

Franky is going to give gold to the natives mined in the Quarry, hidden from everyone.

The two argue and refuse to help each other.