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Title: Storm 1
Uniqueness: Secret Society meets The Supernatural
Source: Dream I had
Tone: Epic
Setting:
Genre: SciFi, Drama
Premise:
Logline: Two Secret Societies have been secretly at war for a century keeping the secret of superpowers and phenomena hidden from the world.
Protagonist: Mariner Storm Yates
Antagonist:
Love Interest:
Sidekicks:
Brief Description of all main characters:
Internal Conflict:
External Conflict:
Beginning: Marier’s
Middle:
End:
Outline
BEGINING
We see the London skyline at night. The sky is cloudy. Lightning strikes in the distance.
A woman is scared running in the rain from something. She leaves her baby with a boy.
The boy takes the baby inside and his parents fall in love with her.
Years later, the girl gets in trouble at school for her parents to show up.
Dream I had
The penthouse or whatever top of building downtown London
Meeting people to visit and they have a bowling alley in kitchen. For some reason spills and messes disappeared, thinks robots
There butler is gone and the rest of the club
Errand boy is hated and new
The others return and are upset to have meeting over new man servants. NOT butler?
She leaves and says not into servants. Meets some guys to share cab with who love she plays video games and says the club sounds dumb, but cool for them being dorks. They are shocked by her age and she shows her ID for name.
Guys leave she runs into the errand boy, revels is undercover cop. She shows id, he places tracking and says to forget him and not to loose the ID
She is curious more about the club to be shown they have a secret with these ritual pillars. Not all get and since she is like them and completes the needed. Storm1 on the pillar with other elements numbered.
MIDDLE
In some place building security and rooms men in charge, she doesn’t want to be with the club. She sees someone she knows. She venters away from the club, past security easily, and searches 2nd floor.
Lots of women of the rival club. Women changing into burlesque reindeer outfits (can-can style) Sees her club. Continues to more rooms.
She finds the girl she met before who claims undercover and not to blow it and her breaking rules as new initiate. Mar claims outranks and girl says she lead and Mar wants to know why.
People come in. Girl yells to cover saying she is trespassing and trying to get info. Mar pretends she is lost and thought the girl was her club.
Mar leaves and everyone is suspicious, maybe they sense her storm. Mar runs into more of her club questioning her loyalty.
Mar hides in a room with claw machine for first friend to pretend not to know her from text questioning and crap. Luck from the errand boy, but the girl thinks her and helps her flee.
Mar hides in a kitchen. She runs into one of her mentors/madams who is highly recommending eating a cupcake before it gets cold. A kitchen that is very cold in the air. Icey lady in the room. Chocolate cupcakes with white icing. And chocolate drizzle. Grinch mountain shaped.
Mar runs into the other friend from start who is sad and unsure if she should help or pretend not to know. Mar says let her go and the girl also has Goodluck at the machine to think she is lucky, but still errand boy secretly.
Mar ran into the head Madam. She takes Mar for a walk. Tells Mar, the girls were testing her and there is a reason she is storm1. Her number1. Says the clubs are divided intentionally to create drama to motivate and strengthen the girls. She has no quarrels with the other club. Who has one storm and no others. But she knew one. Tells her to go talk to her and the club will have to deal with her. Great lady. (Great Lady’s each complete other’s circles, until Storm to fill Storm. Other clubs, of men)
Mar learns the other club leader is her mother. Why she abandoned her. Protecting her from... Mar’s mother is killed.
Storm barley fights off with Lucky Boy and her friends and Madams with the Dukes saving.
A rouge duke... has dead attached to his pillars with dark magic. Focal points around town are connected and why they think their pillars are how they are.
END
Mar wants to give up and go back to her other life.
Everyone begs her. Some girls apologize.
She attends the funeral for the dead Madam that has all the factions... and more. With banquet after in secret place magic help.
AND?
Thinking of End.. i know this out a rough outline and more I will add
Prologue
Prologue
Earth is home to billions of people. They live their lives day by day. Ignorant of the trillions, the share the planet with. Quadrillions, no. Decillions! Adding in the microorganisms we cannot see with the eye. Earth began as bacteria. It grew and evolved. Earth was home to a variety of creatures that continued to evolve for millions of years.
From the beginning...
Not only did living things begin. But other phenomena happened. The most important factor that make Earth unique and has stuck around with not much change would be its weather...
Weather is the state of the atmosphere at a particular place and time. Sunny, Stormy, Windy, Snowy... and more...
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When Earth was born, life began. The weather was born. Touched by the angels who claimed to return again one day, 4 beings of the weather became human. Able to control the weather, they had fun creating other variations of it. Snow liked to blend with Storm and make Ice. Wind liked to move all the rain and snow about to bring sun. And Sun would go and shine for the others to move in and change it. This cycled around in a steady routine. From their frolic, others were born. Snow did not like this. He hated his windy child. He hated the sun out in the snow. Filled with hatred, he blanketed the Earth in ice. After morning the loss of their children, the others managed to push Snow into the ends of the Earth and return to sharing the weather. Snow still manages to have his time over the others. The others are happy, but never let him have his time.
Eventually, the weather just found a routine blended around the world.
Chapter 1
We see the London skyline at night. The sky is cloudy. Lightning strikes in the distance.
A woman appears in an alley with a long cloak on from a cloud. “I’ll find you a safe place.” The hood is up. As she walks the cloud disappears. She is holding a baby. A streetlight flickers as she turns the corner, “no!” She shouted and pulled the baby close to her chest with her curled over it. “Just a light.” The woman is frightened and picks up her pace. Lightening fills the street and thunder follows. By the next turn, it begins to pour rain. She stops under an awning to catch her breath and looks around. “Something around here will protect her.” Leaning up against the door, she looks down the street to see a puddle of water starting to freeze. A man slips upon it. She gasps! “Why, Ice...” She gasps again when turning around as the door to the building opened.
A young teenage boy was putting his coat on to take off his headphones gazing in awe at the woman. “Umm... do I know you?” The woman looked down at her baby and down the street. The ice was moving. The puddle where the man slipped melted. She hugged the boy with the baby in her arms. “Uhh... okay? Who are you?” He was caught off guard. When she stepped back, he was holding the baby. “Wait a minute.” The woman turned around fast as he looked down at the baby. “Hey!” When he looked up a flash of lightning shined and thunder clashed. The baby whined and the boy pulled it into his jacket. “Come back! Please!” He felt a chill and stepped back into the house seeing ice in a puddle in front of him just before closing the door. More lightning and thunder clashed for the rain to slow down and turn to ice crystal.
The boy went back inside his house and his mom ran over, “Jude! What is that!’ Angry at first. “Freddie!” She yelled for his father.
The boy shrugged to explain, “this woman hugged me. As soon as I opened the door. She looked scared. Not homeless. She was very pretty and had nice material on. I was caught off guard.”
The father ran in and looked at his watch and then son, “what? You need a ride Jude. You know I’m about ready for bed.” he sees the baby in his wife’s hands and runs to her. “Wha is this!” He turned angry to Jude, “Jude! What have I!”
“No honey.” The wife stops Freddie. “It’s not his.”
“Oh thank god.” Freddie is relived. “Where did it come from.” He put his finger to the baby’s face and she grabbed it. “Ain’t you the cutest thing.”
The boy shook his head no. “A woman just put her in my arms when I opened the door. She was scared. Ran off in the blink of an eye.” Jude explained again. They all crowd the baby and looked out the window as lightning flashed. Thunder followed, and the power went out.
“Jude, Candles. Mary, stay here.” Freddie took control. He came back with blankets and a bottle of formula and gin.
“For heaven's sake dear!” Mary spoke.
“Don’t worry. This is formula your sister left last summer. The date says its still good.” He throws a blanket over Mary and wraps another around her. He had a baby blanket in his hands to take the baby from Mary. “You said you always wanted another. This is a gift. Of course we’ll go to the authorities. But, in this weather?” They look out the window.
Jude returns with candles. He lights and sets them up around the room. “Am I in trouble?” Jude sat next to his father looking down at the baby drinking from the bottle. “I sware it’s not mine.”
Mary smiled and squeezed his shoulder, “you’re fine.”
“We’re all fine! Look at this little angel!” Freddie moved his nose close to the baby’s nose, “this is such a cute little girl!”
Jude asks, “it’s a girl? I mean... is it ok to check if the diaper doesn't need to be changed?”
“Well...” Freddie leans to Mary and they pull aside the wrap and smile at Jude.
“It’s a girl.” Mary says.
“Is... she... like.. My sister now? How does this work? I don’t want to be the dad.” Jude is nervous.
Freddie pulls the bottle away, “thatta’ girl. Shhhhushhhh.” He whispers and begins to rock the baby in his arms, “we will see in the morning.”
Lighting strikes and thunder booms outside!
“Yikes! Quite the storm we have tonight.” Mary stated. “The tellie said just showers. Not the full storm.”
“Maybe that’s what we shall call her. A nickname for now. Storm. If the authorities can’t do anything. We will keep her. If she should call me dad or grandpa, I’m not sure.”
Jude stood up fast, “whoa! Like I said, I’m not ready to be a dad! Think of what everyone at school would think?”
Mary and Freddie smile at Jude. Mary stood up to hug Jude, “Very well. Then, she will be your cousin and us her aunty and uncle.” Mary stood back holding Jude’s shoulders, “she’s your cousin. But, a secret. Some great aunt on my side you never met’s kids kid.”
Jude and Mary sit next to Freddie and look at the baby. Storm looks tries to look out the window for more lightening and thunder.
Chapter 2
10 years later...
“Mariner (Mare-uh-ner)! Mare!” We see Freddie, looking old and tired. “Mare! Please!” He is struggling walking through the forest. The sky is getting dark. As his breathing becomes rapid, he stops to lean on a tree. A rain drop hit his glasses and he looks up watching clouds become thick. He sees lightning. Whining, “Maaree. Please...” His body starts to drop against the tree until his is sitting with his legs bent in the air. “Mare.” His eyes close, reaching his arm out, looking into the forest. “Mariiiner...”
The rain starts to fall gently. All the clouds go from grey to a black. Lightning shines. Large footsteps are stomping over the foliage. “Dad?” It is Jude. He hears his dad speaking Mariner’s name. “Dad” Moving faster Jude stops to let branches swing behind him. Smiling he walks toward Freddie. “She got us again?”
“Jude. Mu'boy!” Freddies reaches an arm out to him leaning sitting against the tree. “Please. Call her back. I’m too old for this.” Jude was helping Freddie to a stand. “I’m too old for this. I feel like she may have outgrown us.” Jude starts to walk with Freddie over his shoulder. “Mare! It’s almost dinner time.”
“Yeah!” Jude shouts! “I’m guna’ eat yours! Dad’s poot!” Jude smiles. Looking up into the sky to see lighting and thunder sound, he looks over the shoulder Freddie is over. “Please!”
“Oh, you know her,” Freddie clears his throat, “Mare! My darling! If you come back with us, we are sure to lather you with love as we sit as dog out in this god forsaken rain you have blessed our lives with.” He pushes himself away from Jude to stand with a hobble. Both arms out and looking up toward the sky as it begins to downpour, “Mare it bring us a storm!”
Brushes in the woods are heard. Freddie and Jude smile. They walk away from the sounds.
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At a campsite...
Mary had multiple hot dogs stabbed into long metal sticks rested around a fire roasting. She looks up at the sky to see the lighting and hear the thunder. Walking into a tent, an arm is placed into the sleeves of a raincoat. She speak aloud, “Mare... you know the boys don’t like this.” She rotates the hotdogs and walks to a SUV. “Men can’t handle weather changes. Too moody.” She opened the back of the vehicle to pull out an L shape pieces of metal. “Not like us women! Hormonal as always.” She grabbed and umbrella from inside a tent. “I’m here waiting to hear all your stories!” She looks up as rain beings to pour and lighting shine with thunder. “I love all of your guys words!”
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Jude and Freddie walk toward their camp in the woods. Jude saw the fire to rush forth. “Oh? Son surpasses the father?” Jude stopped to turn around and look at his dad. “I’m only joking. And...” Freddie walked passed Jude to the camp turning to look at him. “ Looks like I still made it back first.” Jude bites his lip and puts his hands on his hips as Freddie walks backwards towards Mary and the campfire. “Old man still gots’ it! And you, didn't know if you wanted to be on the trip with us! Ahah!’ Freddie turns to lean down and kiss Mary.
“I love these trips! Maybe...” Jude halts to look at the ground.
“Maybe what, Jude?” Mary worries... she stands up to walk to Jude fast.
“Maybe... it wasn’t me. Maybe it as ah... uh... Jill?” Jue is nervous to look at his mom placing his hands in his pockets.
“Jill?” Mary thinks for a moment. Very excited, “Jill! Aww! You could have brought your girlfriend!” She hugs Jude. “If mare was here right now, she could join in me telling oyu I wanted grandkids then. I am ready for you and her in some years.” Jill starts to cry. Stepping back to look at her son with both hands cupped around her mouth sobbing, “don’t be afraid. We love you both and whoever you do to.”
Freddie had stood to comfort and wrap his arms around jill, “Mare! Your missing this!” He shouted looking around in the rain.
They all look around as lightning holds a sill of light. Mariner looks to be landing on the found gracefully. The light disperses and thunder sounds as the campfire is the only light shining on them. “I’m here! I always am.” She pokes Jude in the shoulder. “I’m happy you finally told them!”
Jude is embarrassed, “Mareee-”
Mariner ran over to hug Mary and Freddie. “Don’t worry! I will always be here!’ They all smile.
Chapter 3